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Panel 1: Jamie looks over their shoulder to Odinon. The two of them look very concerned. Jamie asks, "What was that?" Odinon answers, "The Ka'oh Po'oi. That's their warning signal that the enemy is coming."

Panel 2: wide but short panel. Close up on Jamie, Daniel, and Thomas exchanging looks, all concerned.

Panel 3: wide but short panel. Close up on Odinon and Norsa. Odinon is worried, but Norsa is looking over her shoulder to Basho.

Panel 4: wide but short panel. Close up on Basho as he inhales deeply.

Panel 5: This panel is as wide as the page. We see Basho from the waist up, look to his wife Norsa and say, "That enemy is Ranki. We must evacuate the city."

Norsa asks, "Is that necessary?"

Panel 6: tall panel. Closer in on Basho has his expression turns stern. "He tricked a mocktaw into opening portals that endangered the people of Maliwe."

Panel 7: Zoom out. We see a view of Dogona palace from above. Basho's talking extends into this panel as he says, "I will not have our people threatened like that."

Norsa (from off-panel) says, "Sound the Chimes then, Ma'oor."

On the roof of the palace, we see a Ka'oh Po'oi soldier run up.

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Posted on July 1, 2026 by Kelci

I cannot tell you how many different iterations I did of that "Inhale" sound effect before I landed on this one.

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